I like the additional story style part.
But it did drag on a lot, u cud of speeded up the pictures and add some proper motion to it to keep me interested other than the basic vocal story telling.
ide sujest to redo it, add subtitles for the death, and maybe some interacting bits to.
OMG.. WTF!!? Wow you can make things move and add sound to it!! by please please PLEASE do some good stuff, i mean this is the same crap you have done b4.. just spend more time on your anermation work, and when 5 people have seen it and said its good e nuf, and only then then put it on here!
A good way of showing people how to make a simple but good animation! ide like 2 see some more please
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